obnoxious sutton email #1
Jan. 23rd, 2008 07:50 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Dear Ms. Sutton,
This is just to say
I plan to drop poem 4
along with
all its points
and that
I cannot bear to rewrite it
using
the same stale idea
Forgive me
I am insolent
and a dork
besides.
edit 1/24/08: LOL snippets of sutton group email.
...Adela, I've had to cut your poem 4, so now that's 2 you won't have in your book.
Expert phrasing, that. For her it's always she cuts, never I drop. :3
...if you have a book with only 5 poems, too bad...and you will get a C, D, or F...
ouch.
...the book is the crowning achievement of Poetry II...some of you have already lost 1 poem from it (like Adela); if you fail to drop* poem 4 (like Adela), you will have or will lose ("will have lost" = Adela) 2 poems and so on...
I don't think she's very happy with me. XD;; Not that, you know, I expected her to be.
* "to drop" here indicates dropping it every day in a marathon box for her to correct, not dropping the poem altogether.
This is just to say
I plan to drop poem 4
along with
all its points
and that
I cannot bear to rewrite it
using
the same stale idea
Forgive me
I am insolent
and a dork
besides.
edit 1/24/08: LOL snippets of sutton group email.
...Adela, I've had to cut your poem 4, so now that's 2 you won't have in your book.
Expert phrasing, that. For her it's always she cuts, never I drop. :3
...if you have a book with only 5 poems, too bad...and you will get a C, D, or F...
ouch.
...the book is the crowning achievement of Poetry II...some of you have already lost 1 poem from it (like Adela); if you fail to drop* poem 4 (like Adela), you will have or will lose ("will have lost" = Adela) 2 poems and so on...
I don't think she's very happy with me. XD;; Not that, you know, I expected her to be.
* "to drop" here indicates dropping it every day in a marathon box for her to correct, not dropping the poem altogether.